Friday, 25 January 2013

Poetic Flash Fiction in 51 Syllables.

 What will you write?

I took the prompt words from
Three Word Wednesday
3WW CCCXIII
Brag, icy, and polite.

Here's mine:

No need to brag about it, said Dawn when her pet robot crashed the car.
I know it was icy, Dave chipped in, but the Bat-mobile is unique.
In his polite voice Dawn's robot said, okay, I'll pay to get it fixed.
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20 comments:

  1. Stan Ski25 January 2013 at 15:54

    Dave and Dawn are back in fine style! Nice one :)

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    1. Andy Sewina26 January 2013 at 13:06

      Yeah, and if anyone wants more there's a few on my nanoamerico.blogspot.com bloggage.

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  2. rallentanda26 January 2013 at 01:12

    Hey ..I think you are writing about Dave King! Good to see you again.

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  3. Anonymous26 January 2013 at 01:24

    Very cool!

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  4. Altonian26 January 2013 at 06:19

    I suppose this can be described as 'ice cold humour'. I like it!

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    1. Andy Sewina26 January 2013 at 13:02

      Phew, I'm freezing now!
      Many thanks for playing along.

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  5. anthonynorth26 January 2013 at 09:43

    Great fun. I like it. Hope you enjoy the eBooks. To answer your question, I'm not charging as I'm trying to build up an audience - the main problem with getting publishers interested in me. The eBooks consist of short pieces and not my main books.

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    1. Andy Sewina26 January 2013 at 12:56

      Sounds good Tony, I'll look forward to reading them.

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  6. Old Egg26 January 2013 at 11:01

    The reassurance from the robot was clearly programmed in to relax you after a crash. Having a pet robot rather than a useful one was yet another indulgence that made their lifestyle seem hedonistic.

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  7. Jae Rose26 January 2013 at 12:02

    Lots of human wit tucked in the robotic hinges ;)

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  8. Anonymous26 January 2013 at 13:26

    Haha great :)

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  9. Andy Sewina26 January 2013 at 13:42

    Hi Cakey, here's something you might like - Batman and Alice

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  10. Hal Johnson26 January 2013 at 15:06

    Clever wordplay there with deft use of the TWW prompts. Thanks.

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    1. Andy Sewina26 January 2013 at 20:59

      Thank you, I really enjoyed reading your story this week.

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  11. Andy Sewina27 January 2013 at 01:45

    Cheers! I like the way you get things done...

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  12. Neeta30 January 2013 at 03:17

    Nice writing. Short and sensible.

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